You've Been Warned!!!?

Question

"You've Been Warned"

How do you like my song that I wrote and sang???

http://www.singsnap.com/snap/watchandlisten/play/c1125aa58

Answer 1

its good

but its sounds like i've heard it before

plus its not really my style of music

BUT remember its still good

Answer 2

The beat is off... your vocals don't sync up to it.

You're out of tune on your "wooo woooaa wooaaaghs".

Melisma is evil ... even when you've been practicing your scales. You haven't, not enough to pull that off.

I didn't pay any attention to the words, this isn't my style of music.

So, go back to basics, practice your scales some more, and try to project your voice, give it some support when you're singing. It sounds like you're singing very quietly - back away from the microphone and open up a little more.

Saul