You hurt me I can't breath?

Question

You Hurt Me To The Point

You hurt me just until the point where it stayed

The pain will never go away

And there in the dark recesses of my heart

Are the torn peices where you announced your part

Look me in the eyes

Does it look like I want to cry?

I do

And its over you

The bad memmories simply remain

And they replay themselves over and over again

Im be, ing disentegrated inside

And there you stand overwhelmed with pride

While I lay here, life pouring out of me, exposing my newly pale face

Lillies and white lace

Adorn my spirit scorned

You hurt me to the point where the agony rooted itself deep into me

And like a weed destroyed my living being

Your wrecking my mind with a giant steel ball

Its peircing my insanity, and demolishing it all

you have my neck in your vile thrall

And you've unintentionally rewired my brain

So when they whisper your name

I go compltely insane

Ill never be the same

Instead Ill be the girl that let you in

The girl who no matter how hard she tries, will never win

You are her greatest sin & her longest regret

Hardest to forgive, hardest to forget

You hurt her to the point where the dejection enthralled every bit of her laughter

And this poor girl could never smile after

So Ill devise a plan; to ease my soul

Slit my wrists, and easy goal

Watch me now as the remnants spill out

You took the rest so only tainted nothings were left without a doubt

& watch me now as the choir sings

Pipe organs, chimes, loud and clamoring

Watch me now as the people weep

Then onto their faces solemn sorrow creeps

& watch me now, as the bells ring so loud

Tears and gasps among the crowd

Their lowering me into the ground

Are you watching now?

And even though now Im dead

Cut wrists and bullet in head

Rememeber you caused this

And the pain will NEVER go away

Answer 1

yes the pain never goes away, it's very well written and will find an echo in many hearts which have been touched by pain.  

Answer 2

if your heart is broken, then through that poem so is mine.

it's beautiful. i don't know what to say except it's beautiful and that if u really r heartbroken then u have my deepest sympathies. it's one of those poems that the authors emotion just creeps into your soul.

it is truly beautiful and i'm sure everyone will say that. i just absolutely love it because it's so.. beautiful and then i hate it because it's so sad but that makes me love it even more. u've really captured the the audience there girl.  

Answer 3

wow... simply amazing.

the words articulately joined together in a somewhat seemless chain of poetry and deep emotion.

thankyou for sharing

Answer 4

This was amazing

Keep up the good work

Answer 5

Absolutely Beautiful.

If someone has hurt you, I'm so sorry. You have all my sympathies.  

Answer 6

that was so amazingly beautiful. i know of all those feelings of heartbreak. :(

Answer 7

my heart goes out to you