Your comments on this poem.?

Question

Magic

There is a magic in the way you move, something so honest and pure that I can't quite get used to.

There is a magic in the way you speak, something that moves through me making my senses grow weak.

There is a magic that lives inside your eyes, with each look a flood of emotions from which I cannot hide.

There is a magic deep down in your soul, a magic with which I wish to grow old.

A friend of mine wrote this poem and I wanted to see what other people thought about it. Thank you for your opinion.

Answer 1

Sounds like a song I think I've heard somewhere. Should this really be in the philosophy section?

Anyways, I mean it's not bad or anything but it's kind of cliche.

Answer 2

it sounds vaguely familiar, did you friend take it from somewhere and change magic for another word?

Answer 3

this is a really nice poem. but not deep enough if thats what they are going for. nice work...

Answer 4

It is really bad.

Answer 5

i think it's very good. i like how the words rhyme. it's defintally a lot better than i could do.