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Question

**Winter took it's sweet time in coming last winter. While waiting at a traffic light, the first snow flake fell. This was my inspiration.**

Winter's Embrace

Moist patches of flurriers,

Swirl into a white blanket falling

Across an ashen road.

Softly they fall and

Fill the space

With dotted whiteness

They hurry left, then right,

And criss-cross in the middle

Keeping time with the beat of traffic.

Even hooded, a layer of icy dew

Melts upon my lashes

And I joyously accept winter's embrace.

Answer 1

nice i can picture this itz awesome i love snow!

Answer 2

You have good descriptions in this delightful poem.Keep it up.

Answer 3

Thats a sick poem! Great job! But i feel that instead of 'And I joyously accept winter's embrace.' you should have put something like 'and my thoughts flowed away with it's chill.'

Answer 4

A nice and descriptive poem. Good job!

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