Your opinion and suggestions for the name of my poem?

Question

What do you think of this poem I wrote? I think it might be a little off, so any suggestions will be appreciated.

Sick, gaudy and strewn

Across the lawn like too many filthy paper bags.

One by one, she hurries to dispose of them.

They get caught in the wind and swirl away.

Panic grows and a passionate hatred springs forth from within.

Dizzy and nauseous, she breaks down

While they observe in silence and confusion.

They see not the vile, all consuming pestilence

They see not the last fading remnants of her sanity.

They only see her,

A self-made mess,

Sprawled silently across the neat green grass.

Answer 1

Control is the poems name

Answer 2

Inner Litter

Answer 3

How about Esteem? No that's no good.

Yard Work is Hard Work? No.

Trash Bags Unseen,

Crazy Lady Next Door

I got it--Manicured Lawn. I give up.

I second "Control"

Answer 4

i don't really get what you're trying to say here could you explain?  the rhythm is excellent. i could read this all day. the line that really jumps out at me is 'a self-made mess' so you could call it that if you want.