Your opinion on my poem?

Question

I had the urge.

I looked down

The ditched

Looked like the only way.

The music persuaded me.

I watched my hands

Grip the wheel.

And than,

I snapped out of my trans.

I thought of you.

I knew that I couldn't.

I didn't want you to hurt

Because of me.

You saved my life.

Ok so I know probably not the best poem, but what do ya think?

Answer 1

it is a good poem but i do not know what IT is about.

Answer 2

its ok but i have no clue what its about. i like challenging poems but not to challenging. :O

Answer 3

I am in complete agreement with you...it is definitely NOT the best poem.

Answer 4

such a good poem.. you added the details but a little more stansa. good work... keep it up

Answer 5

Its pretty good, but i also did not understand what it was about. Was it about love? Well could you please help me with mine?

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