Your opinion on this poem i wrote ?

Question

I heard your voice once again

Strange that I should be talking to you

Your words stab like daggers

And everything you do

Everything you say

Makes me miss you more and more

I wounder why

Why should i hurt

Why should i feel pain

Like this is fair

Inever chose to end it all

The moment we ended it all

Should've made me better

Made you sadder

You knoe what you did,yet

Instead I just lay here writing

Because I dont know what else to do

Because sleep doesn't come easy

When your mind is racing

With thoughts about someone you love

Who once loved you back

Or at least said they say

Past memiories like

Ghosts that I can't run away from

It felt as if

I lost my mind

Just as i lost you

Actually

You were never there anyway

It was only an echo

Bouncing of the walls of my heart

Repeating every painful memory

All the moments we shared

I don't know what else to do

Who else to turn to

I didnt want to dream

Because once shattered

But no i realize

All of this was one long dream

I can't go on writing

It pains me so

But its the only thing that gets me through the day

These words

Straight from the heart

And I don't know if you would realise

How different life is

Without you here by my side

But like you said

It's for the better

Somehow I feel worse

Than where I was before

But i realize i am better off

I deserve better

I spent my time on you

Tryin to please the impossible

Now your nothing more than a Ghost

The shadow you've casted

No longer lingers by me

An i realize

I've got to love again

But who an how...

Answer 1

David,

Am I wrong to say that there's a lot of broken hearted people in the world and that women are evil and cruel? Because that is all I read on this post and where men get all in touch with their feelings by writing about love lost! Have I ever suffered a break up? Oh you bet I have, that's why I'm A Blues songwriter. Next time tell us how you really feel...   Grade  B

Answer 2

love sucks, I should know

TFL cares, that'll be $27.50

Answer 3

sounds sick n stupid....u r so not talented

Answer 4

I like it. And it's not to hard to understand. Well done :)

Answer 5

What is my opinion of your poem? This poem is definitely a display of your feelings and of course no one likes to see or hear about another person hurting.  Your work explains exactly what you are going through. I'm relieved that the last lines takes you out of this struggle, in that, you realize you have to love again.

Good work! ... but somewhat depressing which is to be understood, because love "ain't" always pretty.

Take Care.... keep writing

Answer 6

I like it. It's very true and easy for many readers to relate to. Just check up on your spelling.