Your opinions on this poem?

Question

Was it my color on the outside?

Or the fact that I’m not like you

If you would’ve gazed within

You could’ve perceived the individual under my skin

We are human regardless of our ethnic pride

In result, we should look spiritually on the inside

You hung me up and put me out

Color was probably the only reason you came about

I’m sorry, maybe it was just me

Did I do your laundry wrong?

When I cooked your food, did it take too long?

Why don’t we just settle the differences?

Face to face

And while we still have it,

Enjoy the human race

Answer 1

banal and trite

is that right

rhyme and sing song

don't get me wrong

formless ideas in unmetered lines

half-baked thoughts forced into rhymes

artificial language, no one talks that way

you could do better if you had something to say