Your opinions? pleaaase. :]?

Question

I wrote this about my ex, a month before we split up.

UNPERFECTLY PERFECT

We fight so much, and it doesn't stop hurting.

But through all the anger, the passions still burning.

I have to admit, you're a big part-

of most of the things that are wrong with my heart.

You make me cry til' i'm all out of tears.

But then hearing your voice, calms all my fears.

Yeah, I take you for granted- but you do as well.

So, it's easy to see we're no fairytale.

But fairytales end and I hope we never do.

It's a roller coaster ride, but i'm glad it's with you.

The ups and downs are making me queasy.

But no one ever said that love would be easy.

Sometimes I get so tired, and I want to walk away.

But something inside you- makes me want to stay.

Maybe it's the way your smile melts my heart.

Or maybe it's because - I can't picture us apart.

Answer 1

I like it,

but my dear I want to tell you something( Don't let others judge on your work however it was whatever  it was) you can satisfy yourself or let say it is kind of possibel but satisfying others is something hard.

wish you all the best.

Answer 2

My opinion: get a real picture, weirdo.

Answer 3

I give you A plus for your poetry.

You are very good.

Answer 4

Very good... flows well and good rhyming. I really liked

"The ups and downs are making me queasy. But no one ever said that love would be easy."

Written from the heart, yea?

Great work.

Answer 5

"Hi!"

That's a really great poem that young people can relate too. It flows really good and structured well.

And for "the nerd!", the tittle of your name, speaks for yourself.

I wouldn't worry about people like The Nerd, they're just jealous.

Great poem.

Cheers.  : )

Answer 6

Well it would have been nice...except you dumped him a month later :p

Answer 7

That was a great read! Songpoets are in need of telling a good story that people can relate to. I don't know if this is a country song or Bon Jovi? LOL!!! That was meant to be a compliment and not offensive in anyway, but sweetheart, you've got the goods!!! We could benefit from your heartaches and heartbreak... And if that's your real picture, I need to get that idiot ex of yours some glasses! You are gorgeous!!!

Answer 8

wow girl you are good. I love the poem, omg i can relate too it lol its really great :)

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Thanks for your opinion sweetheart!