Your thoughts on my forensic website?

Question

what are you thoughts on my forensic website? It's called Forensic Fact, http://forensicfact.wordpress.com -- tell me what you think and how i can improve it thanks!

Answer 1

From a quick read, there are many typographical errors.

Entomology:timeline section

You use the phrase "dead corpse".

This is redundant, all corpses are dead.

After the "dead corpse", there should be a period for end of sentence, then capitalize the next word for start of next sentence.

John Doe section:

"who's" is contraction for "who is".

You should use "whose identity..."

Fingerprint classification section:

"the suspect has a arch"

should be "an arch"

DNA section:

"so ill start..."

should be "so I'll start..."

the blowfly section:

"homicide investigation's is"

No need for the apostrophe s in investigation.

Arson section:

"and a thing that scary even firefighters have been known to start commit arson..."

This just has so many grammatical/typographical errors!

While the content of the information may be accurate (I didn't read through it all), the presentation comes across poorly due to the grammer and spelling errors.

It is also possible that you need to format the HTML code better, there are some odd characters (squares) in the text of the "Documentation Procedures" section when viewed in Internet Explorer.  Again, while this does not take away from the accuracy of your information, the presentation is poor.

Specifically for the DNA section:

There is a lot of information regarding DNA structure, transcription and translation, etc... but then the forensic paragraph appears to be an afterthought.  Since the website purpose appears to be about forensics, the forensic use of DNA analysis really needs to be brought up to the level of the rest of that section.

Answer 2

Great work on that. Its actually pretty good so I've added the RSS feed to Goggle Reader and will read it whenever you update.

Layout is good, but the winner is the content which seems unique. Again, great work.