Yu-Gi-Oh Nationals here I come... need last minute help?

Question

I want to make this deck able to compete in this current format, so ANY advice from GOOD yugioh players is greatly appreciated. Main deck is 40 cards btw =)

Monsters x20

Jinzo

Caius the Shadow Monarch (3)

Raiza the Storm Monarch

Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch

Mobius the Frost Monarch

Cyber Dragon (2)

Twin-Headed Behemoth

Snipe Hunter

Masked Dragon (2)

Gravekeeper's Spy (2)

Sangan

Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Spell Striker

Marshmallon

Spirit Reaper

Spells x14

Lightning Vortex (2)

Monster Reborn

Premature Burial

Brain Control

Heavy Storm

Giant Trunade

Creature Swap

Swords of Revealing Light

Smashing Ground

Fissure

Enemy Controller

Book Of Moon

Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps x6

Mirror Force

Magic Cylinder

Zoma the Spirit

Compulsory Evacuation Device (3)

Again, I really need pro advice so I know what I can do to counter DAD's, DDT's, swarms, etc. And for the people that are going to say "add Treeborn" I'm, not since he's only a good early draw...

Answer 1

bottomless trap hole. and take out giant trundae and you have too many sacrifice monsters... you could try using vanitys fiend (6 stars 2400 atk... it cant be sp summoned and no monsters can be sp summoned). take out at least one testalos and raiza

Answer 2

hmm looks good for what it is, not much more you can do for speed. but if your really going to tournament with this, get your side deck ready, have some royal decrees, royal oppression, shadow-imprisoning mirror, bottomless trap holes, dd crows. you cant speed your deck up, but you can slow others down, especially d.a.d decks. oppression and shadow mirror really mess them up if you get them at a good time.

so after your first game and you see they have a lot of special summons like d.a.d, dark world, zombie, glad beast, lightsworm or other swarms take out all your special summon cards like monster reborn, premature ect and add in 2 royal oppressions, 2 shadow mirror, and 2 dd crows. then you will pwn most meta game, even d.a.d. ive tested this out my self. a old school beat down beating d.a.d deck. very very funny.

you will have a bit of a problem tho. your deck also needs special summons for speed. so this will contridict your strategy. try to balance your special summons and oppression if you can.

Answer 3

Solid deck now all you need is a good side.

I would suggest either

Shadow imprisioning mirror or light impresioning mirror

Answer 4

Looks good 9/10.

Maybe a Gene-Warped Warwolf would be nice. You should also add Brain Control/Monster Reborn. Stray Lambs too, if you think they can survive.

Answer 5

for traps--mirror force, magic cylinder, and zoma the sprit. spells--vortex, reborn, storm, swap, swords, fissuer, typhoon.  monsters--cyber dragons, masked dragons, striker,spys, jinzo, and the monarchs are all i can think of.