Yu-gi-oh!: Can you rate this deck?

Question

This is more of an experiment. My girlfriend made this deck and I need some opinion as to how I can improve it and decrease it to 40. Adding and taking whatever cards.

Answer 1

Well, first, try to concentrate on a Deck Type (In your Deck, I've seen a lot of Harpy Ladies...) Well, I think it's possible for you to create a Harpie Deck...

Here's a Hint...                    

An example of a Wind-Attribute based deck can be seen in the Lord of the Storm Structure Deck. Wind monsters have good capacity to special summon, and as such the deck can be fast, though some of the monsters are weak, cards such as Harpie Lady 1, Bladefly and Rising Air Current can leave you with a field full of enormous monsters. The tendency of wind cards to destroy magic and trap cards leave you able to attack in relative safety.

A weakness this deck is that most of the time your cards target all Wind Monsters, and not just your own, such as the ATK boost from cards like Harpie Lady 1, Bladefly, and Rising Air Current. This makes commonly played cards like Elemental Hero Stratos and Raiza the Storm Monarch gain from your own card effects.You may also add monster destroying cards such as Fissure etc., since Wind cards are ussually weak, they may not able to destroy commonly used monsters today.

Monster Cards

Harpie Lady 1

Harpie Lady 2

Harpie Lady 3

Cyber Harpie Lady

Flying Kamakiri #1

Raiza the Storm Monarch

Garuda the Wind Spirit

Hunter Owl

Lady Ninja Yae

Harpie Queen

Harpie Lady Sisters

Wind Effigy

Birdface

Silpheed

Harpie's Pet Dragon

Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon

Barrier Statue of the Stormwinds

Enraged Battle Ox

Winged Rhynos

Chaosrider Gustaph

Sonic Shooter

Storm Shooter

Simorgh, Bird of Ancestry

Simorgh, Bird of Divinity

[edit] Spell Cards

Rising Air Current

Elegant Egotist

Harpies' Hunting Ground

Triangle Ecstasy Spark

Foolish Burial

Fissure

Hammer Shot

Smashing Ground

Shrink

Trap Cards

Icarus Attack

Spiritual Wind Art - Miyabi

Hysteric Party

Aqua Chorus

Strong Against

Skill Drain Deck

Rock Deck

Hope I helped ^^

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Answer 2

Sup, First thing i wanna know is does your girlfriend actually play yugioh? If she does then thats awesome!

Well i'll say that deck is pretty good, but i for one would remove the birdface but otherwise pretty good 8/10

Answer 3

What kind of deck are you if you are a wind deck you must remove clay man, dark blade, luster dragon,warrior dai grepher and slate warrior . Try to do  beat down deck

are your girlfriend will get angry if you did not use that deck that she made? if not try that deck that i suggested.

Answer 4

in future put the list into monster/spell/trap headings (makes it much easier to read) ... if trying to make a harpie deck then i would suggest you use any 3 harpie ladies (harpie lady1, harpie lady2, harpie lady3, cyber harpie lady) and 3x harpie queen ... 2/3x harpies hunting ground ... a couple of elegant egotist and some average spell and traps (eg heavy storm, monster reborn, torrential tribute, mirror force) ... hope this helps