YuGiOh Deck Help...?

Question

1x D.D. Warrior Lady

1x D.D. Assailant

1x Field Commander Rahz

1x Mobius the Frost Monarch

2x Spirit Reaper

1x Don Zaloog

1x Goblin Atk Force

1x Mystic Swordsman lv.2

1x Mystic Swordsman lv.4

1x Silent Swordsman lv. 5

1x Marauding Captain

1x Neo Spacian Grand Mole

2x Exiled Force

1x Amazoness Swords Woman

1x Caius the Shadow Monarch

1x E - Hero WildHeart

1x Total Defense Shogun

1x Freed the Matchless General

1x Brron, Mad King Of DarkWorld

2x CyberDragon

1x Night Assailant

1x Goldd, Wuu Lord of D, World

Magic

2x Reinforcement of the Army

1x The warrior returning alive

1x noble man of crossout

1x Shield Crush

1x Premature Burial

2x Lightning Vortex

1x Mage Power

1x United We Stand

1x MST

1x Ebikyo Drakmord

1x Confiscation

1x Smashing Ground

1x Heavy Storm

1x Brain Control

Trap

2x Sakuretsu Armor

1x Shadow Spell

1x Phoenix Wing wind blast

1x Pulling the Rug

1x Waboku

1x Trap Jammer

1x Dark Spirit Of the Silent

1x Solemn Judgement

Answer 1

yeah man, 7/10.  You god some mad brain control

Answer 2

i like where youre going with this deck, but it will get nowhere near competetiv levels

-all mystic swords men

-goblin attack force

-don zaloog

-all dark world ppl

-wildheart (good effect but noone really uses traps)

-all equips

-dark spirit of the silent

-wabuko

-shadow spell

-pheonix wing wind blast

-pulling the rug

-trap jammer

+1 sakuretsu

+1 torrential tribute

+1 mirror force

+2 smashing ground

+1 treeborn frog

+1 sangan

basically shove any cards that will get free special summons

now for you drawing power: this is teh best combo out there so far:

x1 d hero disk commander

x2 d hero fear monger (great for disk commander)

x2 d hero dasher (good for special sumons)

x2 (or 3) d hero diamond dude (pulls your magics out REALLY FAST, this card is very underestimated

x3 Destiny Draw (great with diamond dude)

x2 d hero malicious (good with destiny draw cuz if u discard this card, free special summon :D)

every good deck has a few d heros

without suggestions: 6/10

with: 9/10

(only hard cards to get will be the destiny draws n thats it, mirror force just makes you look cool :D)

Answer 3

- 1 spirit reaper

u r o0nly allowed 1 man

Answer 4

Hmm, 7/10, and take out brain control.