Yugioh Card Deck Advice

Question

is this a good yugioh card deck i made

monsters:

1xMirage dragon

2xMasked dragon

1xLord of D.

1xKuriboh

1xLuster dragon

1xTime wizard

1xDouble Coston

1xRed eyes b. chick

1xRed eyes b. dragon

1x Red eyes darkness dragon

3xBlue eyes white dragon

1xBlack luster soldier

1xPaladin of white dragon

1xArmed dragon lvl3

1xArmed dragon lvl5

1xArmed dragon lvl7

1x Gemini elf

Spells:

1xLightning vortex

1xSmashing ground

1xMonster reborn

1xHorn of unicorn

1xWhite dragon ritual

1xFairy of the spring

1xChange of heart

1xReload

1xBlack luster ritual

1xThe flute of summoning dragon

1xHorn of light

1xPot of greed

1xMystical space typhoon

1xSword of deap seated

1xCard destruction

1xShield and sword

1xSwords of revealing lights

Traps:

2x Trap holes

1xDust tornado

1xMagic jammer

1xCall of the haunted

1xEnchanted javelin

1xTrap jammer

1xA hero emerges

1xDraining shield

1xTorrentrial Tribute

1xTime seal

1xThunder of ruler

1xFake trap

I am a beginner and i made this deck and yes it is a dragon deck mostly but i was wondering if any experts out there can give a begginer some tips and stragety(cant spell) so if you can please help me email me on msn or yahoo my thing is [e-mail]

Answer 1

Not bad for a beginner.  

Answer 2

First off, get rid of all the situational cards such as Flute of Summoning Dragon. The chances of you pulling it off when you have a well shuffled deck are very close to zero. This includes the rituals and the Red-Eyes series.

Also, get rid of cards that just don't fit. Time Wizard, for example, only works if you have a Second Coin Toss and it's in a luck-based deck. Double Coston only works if using tribute-heavy cards like Dark Magician.

Also, make cuts so that your monsters are half your deck, and the majority of the remaining are Spells. Than test your deck out with someone and see which card are more annoying than useful (I can say right now Horn of the Unicorn and Sword of Deep-Seated are really annoying).

Answer 3

this is an pretty good deck for an beginner use this deck for an little while for like an month and duel an lot then change up whats wrong with your deck