Yugioh Dark deck for regionals?

Question

x3 Armageddon Knight

x3 Dark Grepher

x1 Dark Magician of Chaos

x2 Destiny Hero - Malicious

x2 Destiny Hero - Dasher

x2 Mystic Tomato

x1 Doomsday Horror

x1 sangan

x1 Jinzo

x1 Snipe Hunter

x1 The Dark Creator

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Rainbow Dark Dragon

Spells

x2 Foolish Burial

x1 D.D.R Different Dimension Reincarnation

x1 Fissure

x1 Allure of Darkness

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Noblemen of Crossout

x1 The Beginning of the End

x1 Lightning vortex

x1 Reinforcement of the Army

x1 Monster Reborn

Traps

x2 Escape From the Dark Dimension

x1 Magic Cylinder

x1 Mirror Force

x1 Torrential Tribute

x3 Trap Hole

Be specific about the problems.

Answer 1

your entered in the regionals in richmond to

Answer 2

monsters

very good add more 1 tribute cards

spells

take 1 foolish burial out so u have 1 monster reborn and 1 foolish burial

monster reborn is band so yer

and 1 monster recarnation for the foolish burial combo

traps

take out exscape for the dark dimenison

add magic cylnder

take all trap holes and add 3 bottless trap holes

soz about the spelling im only 10