Yugioh-Darkworld Deck?

Question

Hello this is My Darkworld deck, theme named "Eye of Darkworld". What i need is some sugestions and some tips/strategys.

Monsters: 23

1 Gold-Wu

2 Silva

3 Beiige, Vanguard

2 Kahkki, Guerilla

3 Evil Hero Infernal Gainer

2 Newdoria

2 Scarr, Scout

2 Renge, Gatekeeper

1 Gravatic Orb

1 Gren. Tactition

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Dark Crusader

1 Zure Knight

1 Brron, Mad King

Magics/Spells: 10

2 The cheerful coffin

2 DW Lightning

1 Gateway to darkworld

1 Dragged down into the grave

1 Card Destruction

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Book of Moon

1 Hammer Shot

Traps: 8

3 Dark Deal

2 Forced Requisition

1 Mind Crush

1 Forces Of Darkness

1 Dust Tornado

Keep in mind I play tournaments. I was thinkin switchin out Zure And D crusader for 2 more Brrons. Also I want to add a couple Fines into that mess of traps. Also, keep in mind, i need stuff that will move quickly, leavin my oponent no time to react. Please Give any sugestion as possible

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Answer 1

and i quote from my previous answer

-2 Scarr, Scout

-3 Dark Deal

-2 Forced Requisition

-1 Forces Of Darkness

-2 The cheerful coffin

-1 Gateway to darkworld

-1 Dragged down into the grave

-1 Gravatic Orb

-1 Dark Crusader

-1 Zure Knight

-1 Hammer Shot

-2 Renge, Gatekeeper

+1 newdoria

+2 creature swaps

+2 brron

+2 goldd

+3 darkworld dealings

+1 smashing ground

+1 fissure

+1 premature berial

+3 card of safe return

+1 monster reborn

Answer 2

u might want to think about puting cards that revive ur monsters. otherwise nice deck Id give 9/10

Answer 3

Monsters: 21

3 Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

3 Sillva, Warlord of Dark World

2 Brron, Mad King of Dark World

2 Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World

2 Evil Hero Infernal Gainer

1 Snipe Hunter

2 Broww, Huntsman of Dark World

2 Newdoria

2 Kahkii, Guerilla of Dark World

2 Gren, Tactician of Dark World

Spells: 12

3 Dark World Dealings

2 Dark World Lightning

2 The Cheerful Coffin

1 Gateway to Dark World

1 Card Destruction

1 Heavy Storm

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

Traps: 7

2 Fine

2 Forced Requisition

1 The Forces of Darkness

1 Mind Crush

1 Torrential Tribute

Total: 40 cards