Yugioh Deck Rate/Fix/Comment?

Question

Monsters = 21

Light and Darkness Dragon

Guardian Angel Joan

The Creator

3x Kaiser Sea Horse

Cyber Dragon

2x Bazoo the Soul-Eater

Exiled Force

D. D. Warrior Lady

D. D. Warrior

2x D. D. Assailant

2x Masked Dragon

Twin-Headed Behemoth

Dekoichi…

Marshmallon

Snipe Hunter

The Creator Incarnate

Traps = 8

Magic Cylinder

Torrential Tribute

3x Sakuretsu Armor

Threatening Roar (in till I get a mirror force)

Trap Hole

Zoma the Spirit

Spells = 11

2x Enemy Controller

Reinforcement of the Army

Lightning Vortex

Soul Exchange

D.D.R. – Different Dimension Reincarnation

Nobleman of Crossout

Mystical Space Typhoon

Premature Burial

Smashing Ground

Brain Control

Side Deck

2x Thestalos

Mobius

Caius

Granmarg

Treeborn

2x Pitch-Black Warwolf

D. D. Crow

Brain Jacker

Old Vindictive Magician

2x Pulling the Rugs

Foolish Burial

By Order of the Emperor

Answer 1

5/10, make up ur mind, DD or dragons.  the 2 don't mix so well.  a pure DD deck can have reinforcement power of scout+surviver while a dragon massive rez and charge force.... a mixed like urs might create touch trouble(first few cards die to card effect) but very soon u will run out counter tactic and they'll pull through while u r unable to master a force due to non-uniform(hence many cards have target/requirement problem) content.

on that note, dark monarch should have been ur first pick... u running plenty removal anyway. use 3.... if not in deck, in side

there is a deck type that u might like based on ur card choice.  a total destruction deck.  its content is that every single card in deck can take out 1 or more opponent card, hence effectively grant u long term card advantage and possibly deck advantage with a few limited card that serve as "back ups" that return cards(pot of avarice in specific)  exiled force, exploder dragon, sakurasu armor, dimonsional prison, heavy storm, MST, lightning, old vidictive etc.  suggest about 50 cards in deck, with destructive power of between 60-100(due to uncertainty of heavy etc) not counting the recycle cards(pot of avarice)  this usually allows u to pull ahead by making ur opponent have no card to use.... seeing half ur deck is that sorta thing, what the hey?(note: needleworm, morphing etc can help to mill at same time u burning the field/hand down... consider in side)