Yugioh Deck - Rate & Fix!! Please!!?

Question

Here is a deck that uses low attack point monsters that have useful effects. I call it the Rulers Of The World Structure Deck!!!

NO INAPPROPRIATE ANSWERS!! PLEASE!!

Monsters(17):

x1 Reflect Bounder

x1 Wall Of Illusion

x1 Golem Sentry

x1 Cybernetic Magician

x1 Marshmallon

x2 Vengeful Shinobi

x2 Goldd, Wu Lord Of Dark World

x2 Stealth Bird

x2 Mythical Beast Cereberus

x2 Gear Golem The Moving Fortress

x2 Guardian Sphinx

Spells(17):

x1 Sowrds Of Revealing Light

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 Giant Trunade

x1 Brain Control

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x2 Enemy Controller

x2 Soul Exchange

x2 Mage Power

x2 Nightmares Steelcage

x2 Shallow Grave

x2 Lightning Vortex

x2 Hammer Shot

Traps(6):

x1 Torrential Tribute

x1 Magic Cylinder

x2 Waboku

x2 Ordeal Of A Traveler

You can also tell me what cards to take out and what cards to put in.

Answer 1

i think u need another weak monster with a strong/good effect, like say "Air humming bird, man eater bug etc.

plus i think u need more monsters.

Answer 2

Monsters: 22

2 Cybernetic Magician

1 Guardian Sphinx

2 Magical Exemplar

1 Snipe Hunter

1 White Ninja

2 Mythical Beast Cerberus

1 Newdoria

3 Gravekeeper's Spy

1 Gravekeeper's Guard

1 Sangan

1 Wall of Illusion

1 Gear Golem the Moving Fortress

1 Morphing Jar

2 Stealth Bird

1 Marshmallon

1 Destiny Hero - Disc Commander

Spells: 13

2 Mage Power

2 Lightning Vortex

1 Smashing Ground

1 Hammer Shot

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

2 Enemy Controller

1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps: 7

2 Limit Reverse

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Sakuretsu Armor

Total: 42 cards

Answer 3

well if you want to win battles this isnt the deck for you.

if you want to win you should consider getting cards like troop dragon and masked dragon that you could re summon when they die and then scrafice for 6 stars. or you could make and effect deck that have high lvl monsters like insect cards and better magic cards. if your ever going to make a dragon deck talk to me. but for weak effect cards im not so good you should go for cards like the ones in the vampire deck or spellcasters one.