Yugioh Deck Rate/Fix?

Question

This is the deck that i am going to take to my local tournaments. I call it dimensional return.(corny)

Monsters:21

bazoo the soul-eater-3

cyber dragon-2

jinzo

d.d. survivor-3

d.d. assaliant-2

d.d. warrior lady

elemental hero wildheart-2

banisher of the radiance-2

exiled force-2

sangan

sprit reaper

marshmallon

Spells:14

Allure of darkness-2

dimensional fissure-3

reinforcement of the army-2

enemy controller-2

smashing ground

fissure

pre-mature burial

book of moon

brain control

Traps:6

return from the different dimension

sakuretsu armor-2

magic cylinder

torrential tribute

bottomless trap hole

Please include any changes that might make my deck better. I have a lot of friends that play yugioh and i have beaten every single one of them multiple times with this deck.

ThAnK YoU!!

Answer 1

Not really the greatest thing in the world, but certainly not the worst. Your running dd cards with only banishers, wich is a bad idea, throw in dimensional fissure, from person experience I can tell you that macro cosmos is not all it's cracked up to be. Take out the bazoo's. there useless in a deck that feeds of monsters being removed from play, think about it, if there always being removed from play theres no sense in using a card that needs a graveyard! Try to find a mirror force if you can and add in a neo spacian graand mole.

Good luck and happy dueling :]

Answer 2

You had a nice you-gi-oh card!

Answer 3

Personally I don't like D.D. decks but I give this one a 8.

I suggest taking out Premature Burial for Monster Reborn. This way, no cost is needed and the monster has a better chance of staying on the field.