Yugioh - Help rate and fix my Dark Deck Ver.2?

Question

Okay so after a couple of matches I realised that my dark deck needed more power house monsters. I won a couple matches in the Local tournament but lost to more advance decks.

MONSTERS:

Darklord Zerato

Dark Creator

Jinzo

Dark Nephthys

Destiny Hero - Plasma

Dark Red Enchanter

Dark Magician of Chaos

Destiny Hero - Dasher

Destiny Hero - Dasher

Light and Darkness Dragon

Mystic Tomato

Armageddon Knight

Armageddon Knight

Armageddon Knight

Destiny Hero - Disk Commander

Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

Dark Crusader

Dark Crusader

Snipe Hunter

Cyber Valley

Cyber Valley

Cyber Valley

Spear Cretin

Sangan

SPELLS:

Allure of Darkness

Allure of Darkness

Trade In

Trade In

D.D.R

D.D.R

Fires of Doomsday

Fires of Doomsday

Foolish Burial

Foolish Burial

Heavy Storm

Card of Safe Return

Monster Reborn

Premature Burial

TRAPS:

7 Tools of the Bandit

7 Tools of the Bandit

Dark Illusion

Dark Illusion

Torrential

Mirror Force

Answer 1

id give it a 8/10 its ok but id look at metagame.com and tcgplayer.com fo help but u could probably top 8 at locals maybe 16 at regonials i hope i helped. oh and take out a crusader

Answer 2

good deck my advice is to take out the d heros and add grave squirmers

Answer 3

This deck needs a lot of work.

You're running a heavy rfg engine, with no returns/escapes. It seems like you took all your ptdn holos and crammed them in here.

Nuke nepthys/creator/dark red enchanter. Not needed. Dasher would be nice if you actually had discard cost cards or destiny draws. Nuke both or get d-draws. Crusader is bad, -2. Cyber valleys are mediocre in this deck, but you need draw power.

The only traps you should run from what you have are the mirror and torrential. 7 tools is garbage. Add 3x limit reverse to abuse the disc and make up for the lack of d-draw. Add morphing jar. -1 d.d.r. Return from the different dimension is a must.

Dark decks tend to not do so well unless you can afford a fully equipped version. DaD's needed.

Answer 4

add a few mystic plasma zones.

Try a few dark armed dragons?

try Yubel?