Yugioh - Please rate and comment on my Advance Conservative Dark Deck.?

Question

6

Monsters

Lv.5+

1x Dark Magician of Chaos

1x Jinzo

1x Dark Red Enchanter

1x The Dark Creator

2x Ciaus the Shadow Monarch

18

Monsters

Lv.1-4

2x Armageddon Knight

3x Cyber Valley

2x Mask of Darkness

2x Dark Crusader

2x Obsidian Dragon

2x Strike Ninja

2x Mystic Tomato

1x Destiny Hero Disk Commander

1x Snipe Hunter

1x Sangan

10

Magic

2x Allure of Darkness

2x Reinforcements of the Army

1x Monster Reborn

1x Premature Burial

1x Brain Control

1x United We Stand

1x Fires of Doomsday

1x Heavy Storm

10

Traps

3x Dark Illusion

2x Metal Reflect Slime

3x Escape from the Dark Dimension

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Mirror Force

For my side Deck..

1x Jinzo

2x Dark Eruption

1x Dark General Freed

2x Cyber Dragon

1x Marshmallon

2x Phantom of Chaos

2x D.D Crow

2x Il Cat of Omen

Answer 1

Well for starter lets talk about strike ninja. hes a great monster but you need to support him. If your not running scout planes there is no reason to run him in twos. I would't suggest gettign scout planes so drop the strike ninja to one. You only need to get him out, and he will be there for awhile.

Second you should drop the metal reflect slimes. You would do better with a couple limit reverse. These will allow you to abuse your sangan and disk commander. Speaking of low attack dark monsters, i dont see the point of obsidian dragon, Drop him. Instead try D-hero fear monger, who can help you out draw your opponet and be yet another option for limit reverse.

Your high attack monster look solid, but you could try a D. hero plasma. It helps with the control element. If you want to run him add an E hero stratos. And you might as well get a d-hero dasher. These monster help with swarming the field fast.  

With all the d/e heros try out a few destiny draws. replacing the united we stand, and all one dark illusion. I dont know hom many decks you deal with that target monsters so i dont know how useful that card is.

try king promethus instead of Dark Crusader

Answer 2

Sorry, I don't know the first thing about Yu-Gi-Oh but they sound like they're good!

Answer 3

Well its obvious you Destiny Hero is in there as a filler, so replace him with a Dark Eruption. Also, your lv 4 and lowers look pretty weak on attack. Incase you need to go offensive early, you're going to need to add Archfiend Soldiers (4 star no effect 1900atk) otherwise I like it. I am going to through this out there though, not recommending it, but i built my cuz one like this, and since so many darks are also fiends, and Obsidian Dragon is rock, dark fusion or dark calling would be good with Evil Hero Dark Gaia! it works very well as a last resort!

Answer 4

ok do these changes:

- 1 reinforcements of the army

+1 fires of doomsday

-1 dark illision

+3 sakeretsu armors

Thats it happy deuling =)