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Question

This deck needs a side deck and an upgrade to the spells and traps.

DARKWORLD SKILL DRAIN:

TOTAL:40

MONSTERS:20

3 Goldd

3 Sillva

3 Brron

3 Broww

2 Newdoria

1 Morphing Jar

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Sangan

1 Night Assailant

1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

The spell and traps arent sorted out so heres what i have in Mind.

These cards made the mext cut so it would be appriciated if you sorted it out. Best answer will be rewarded.

3 Dark World Dealings

2 Dark Worl Lightning

2 Hand Destuction

2 Card of Safe return

2 Cheerful Coffin

2 Enemy Controller

2 Book of Moon

1 Hand Destruction

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Smashing Ground

1 Brain Control

1 Monster Reborn

2 Divine Wrath

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Skill Drain

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Mirror Force

1 Mind Crush

1 Trap Dustshoot

Answer 1

Currently, you have 20 spells and 10 traps. Since a lot of your spells are more useful, I would suggest a big split for them, such as 14-6 or 15-5. Here is my list of ones you should use:

Spells (15):

3 Dark world dealings

2 Cheerful Coffin

3 Hand Destruction (2+1 since you listed it twice)

2 Book of Moon

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Brain Control

1 Smashing Ground

2 Card of Safe Return

Eliminated (5):

2 Enemy Controller

2 Dark World Lightning

1 Monster Reborn

Why: For Dark World Lightning: unless you are doing a combo w/ Book of Moon, face-down monsters are no threat to Dark World decks. They are often destroyed quickly anyway. Even though you can discard a card, the benefits are not as big as other cards that allow you to do so. For Enemy Controller: One effect forces you to tribute a monster. However, having monsters on the field is one of Dark World's biggest problems! The other effect only helps for one opposing monster one turn. For Monster Reborn: can't hurt, but just isn't that great in this deck. The cards I kept allow for discarding but also have many benefits and are better defensively than Enemy Controller/Dark World Lightning. I would even suggest more Lightning Vortexes so you don't lose field presence.

Traps (5):

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Trap Dustshoot

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Mirror Force

Eliminated (5):

2 Skill Drain

2 Divine Wrath

1 Mind Crush

Why: For Mind Crush: You have enough discarding in spells. Focus on defense. For Divine Wrath and Skill Drain: Don't worry about monster effects so much. Most of them won't stop your discarding effects. You could even include more defensive traps if you wanted, but it's up to you.

Include the eliminated ones in the side deck (that's nine) as well as:

-Sakuretsu Armor(s)

-Final Destiny(s) (even though it's risky, it's good to get Sillva and/or Goldd for a direct attack)

-Spell Vanishing(s)

Sorry... I tend to write too much.