Yugioh Rate/Fix Deck?

Question

Kinda like a Deckout/Control

(40) card deck

What should I add take out and fix??

Monsters

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1 Needle worm

1 GreenKappa

1 Jinzo

1 Vampire Lord

2 Sauske samurai

1 Sangan

1 Night Assilant

1 Morphing Jar #2

1 D.D Warrior

1 Kycoo The Ghost Destroyer

1 Don Zaloog

1 D.D warrior Lady

1 Mask of Darkness

1 Sprit Reaper

Spells

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Card Distrusction

Nobleman of Cross Out

Lighting Vortex

Book of Moon

ScapeGoat

Swords of Revealing Light

Monster Reborn

Dark Core

HeavyStorm

Prematrue Burrial

Mystical Space Typhon

Traps

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Sakuretsu Armor

Cease Fire

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Karma Cut

2 Drop Off

Divine Wrath

Answer 1

Ignore what that idiot just said. This could be a good deck with some work. First of all, playing Jinzo aswell as as many traps your using is a big no-no. Take out Jinzo and add more needle worm. add in 2 magic jammer. If an opponent uses two nobleman, your screwed. removes from play all the flip effect monsters. Lose the Mask of darkness and try a single  doom dozer. Can be special summoned. Take out bottomless, Karma cut and ceasefire. Add in The Gift of Greed and Hiros shadow scout.

Answer 2

buddy, u gonna need a lot more and more usefull trap cards

put in cards like "compulsory evacuation ??? " ( i 4gt the full name), trap hole or even the spirit message cards

Answer 3

garbo