Yugioh: Rate+Fix my fast Direct Damage Deck?

Question

Get Cards:

1 Card Destruction

1 Sangan

2 reckless greed

1 creature swap

1 monster reborn

1 morphing jar #2

7 total

Destroy Spell/Trap:

1 Dust Tornado

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 heavy storm

3 total

Destroy Monster:

1 Sakuretsu Armor

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Dark Dust Spirit

1 Tribute To The Doomed

1 skull lair

5 total

Inflict Direct Damage:

1 Lava Golem

1 Magic Cilinder

3 Ominous Forunetelling

3 Attack and Receive

1 Stealth Bird

3 Just Desserts

3 Princes of Tsuguri

1 Des Koala

1 ookazi

1 cemetery bomb

1 ceasefire

16 total

Protect from Attacks:

1 Des Counterblow

1 Gravity Bind

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Scapegoat

1 The Dark Door

1 Spirit Reaper

1 zero gravity

1 lever limit – area B

1 curse of anubis

9 total

40 TOTAL

Im already looking for 2 stealth birds, 2 des koalas, a marshmallon, 3 poison of the old man and a morphing jar. Other suggestions or some cards that need to be removed?

Plz fix and Rate (before and after fix)

Answer 1

Ok.  First of all, it's not a direct damage deck as direct damage means something totally different.  This is called a burn deck/stall burn.  Take out the Des Counterblow, Cemetary Bomb, Ookazi, 1 or 2 Tsurugi's, 3 Attack and Receive, 1 or 2 Just Desserts, 2 Ominous Fortunetelling, Dark Dust Spirit as it destroys your own monsters too.  You need to add 2 Stealth Birds, Chain Strike, 2 Des Koalas, Marshmallon, 3 Poison of the Old Man, Morphing Jar, 1 more Lava Golem, you also need 2 Secret Barrel.  That should be an even trade of cards and you should still have 40 cards.

Before Fix - 8/10

After Fix - 9/10

Answer 2

sucks so much u can not even fix it

restart and then make a beatdown deck