Yugioh deck fix?

Question

My Yu-Gi-Oh Deck

Monsters- 23

DMoC

Caius the Shadow Monarch x3

Mobius the Frost Monarch

Jinzo x2

Card Trooper

Don Zaloog x2

Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive

D.D. Warrior Lady

Sangan

Snipe Hunter

Old Vindictive Magician x2

Apprentice Magician x3

Hydrogeddon x3

Spirit Reaper

Spells- 15

MST

Shrink x3

Brain Control

Enemy Controller

Fires of Doomsday x2

Rush Recklessly x2

Nobleman of Crossout

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Smashing Ground

Heavy Storm

Trap- 4

Torrential Tribute

Trap Dustshoot

Sakuretsu Armor

Crush Card Virus

Can u plz explain :) thanx

Answer 1

s***w the other guy.This is a anice deck try 3 cyber vally and a amirror force 8 out of 10

Answer 2

yeah, I'm with dark dragon, don't listen to the first answer, and out of the cards I know (6) I'd give it a 8/10

Answer 3

you've got an OK deck, but you may want to get rid of the the rush recklesslys and replace them with premature burial and a call of the haunted. also, if you were making it tourney legal, you're not allowed monster reborn and apprentice magician is restricted to 2, instead i'd put in a marshmallon and a cost down

Anyway, about 8 1/2 at the moment