Yugioh water deck (roaring waves) help, whats missing?

Question

I'm needing a lil help on this for my friend. I'm running a zombie deck and i'm 100% aware of what i'm needing, so i tend to help my friends with there decks.

Right now he dosn't have the cards but he "can" get them so any help would be nice. As of now, the only problems I see with this deck is it is MAJORLY LACKING DRAW POWER!....With the format I built this by his hands going to empty extremly fast with the abyssal soldiers, cyber sharks, and cranium fish.

Please before posting look at this carefully and make corrections going by the special summon format. This deck is ment to run like my zombies without the draw power atm.

Deck Name: Roaring Waves

Author: King Tirant/Mortaltirant

Count: 40

Monsters: 21

Tribute:

Cranium Fish

Cranium Fish

Cyber Shark

Cyber Shark

Cyber Shark

Giga Gagagigo

Giga Gagagigo

Giga Gagagigo

Levia-Dragon - Daedalus

Non-Tribute:

Abyss Soldier

Abyss Soldier

Abyss Soldier

Abyssal Kingshark

Abyssal Kingshark

Ocean's Keeper

Ocean's Keeper

Ocean's Keeper

Snipe Hunter

Warrior of Atlantis

Warrior of Atlantis

Warrior of Atlantis

Spells: 12

A Legendary Ocean

A Legendary Ocean

A Legendary Ocean

Creature Swap

Creature Swap

Heavy Storm

Lightning Vortex

Lightning Vortex

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Nobleman of Crossout

Smashing Ground

Traps: 7

Mirror Force

Sakuretsu Armor

Sakuretsu Armor

Sakuretsu Armor

Tornado Wall

Tornado Wall

Torrential Tribute

Side Deck:

None At The Moment

One last thing, this deck is built to be advanced format (playing ban/restrictions), the new ban/res list shall go into effect sep. 1, 08 (7 days away). If you are not aware of the upcoming format please visit: http://entertainment.upperdeck.com/yugioh/en/news/strategy.aspx?aid=4658

Answer 1

Well, My first look, and I suspect your deck needs less of each copy of a certain card. For example, drop a Lightning Vortex, a Creature Swap, drop the Smashing Ground altogether, drop all of the Sakuretsu Armors, and one Tornado Wall, side deck a Field Barrier to protect your  A Legendary Ocean, drop a Warrior of Atlantis, you don't want to count on all 3 copies of A Legendary Ocean swarming your hand and having to discard them. For help with hand management, add Card Trader or Card of Safe Return because you will be summoning your Cranium Fish card often from the graveyard, add Premature Burial, add one or two copies of the Searcher, Mother Grizzly, drop an Abyss Soldier and a Giga Gagagigo, add either Bottomless Trap Hole or Solemn Judgment for protection against monsters with ATK above 2000, drop a Cyber Shark.

    These are just recommendations, it is up to you if you want to keep your deck the way it is or make arrangements and try other Water monsters that are supported by A Legendary Ocean. If your deck works fine the way it is as a quick Special Summon deck, then make no changes. However, I never suggest using more than one Lightning Vortex as it gives up to much hand management. Players participating in regionals etc. do not even use one copy of Lightning Vortex or Sakurestu Armor because it requires deck space they need for other things like Search cards, Quick Drawing cards, and field presence. Consider these topics when you are making an kind of deck, depending on what that certain deck requires of course.

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