Zombie Deck Rate/Fix

Question

I'm kinda on a budget for this (basically i cant get il blud, allure, ccv) but Nonetheless there should be room for a fix avoiding these cards.

Monsters

X1 Despair From the dark ( good for mirror matches and especiall the zombie deck that use hand destruction)

X3 Ryu Kokki

X3 Zombie Master

X3 Mezuki

X3 Pyramid Turtle

X1 Sangan

X1 Snipe hunter

X1 Spirit reaper

X1 Card Trooper

X1 Morphing Jar

X1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Spells

X3 Book of Life

X3 Card of Safe Return

X1 Monster Reborn

X1 Premature Burial

X1 Heavy Storm

X1 Mystical Space Typhoon

X2 Hand Destruction

X1 Card Destruction

X1 Creature Swap

X2 Lightning Vortex

Traps

X3 Solemn Judgement

X1 Mirror Force

X1 Trap Dustshoot

Here are some cool combo’s that the deck can pull off:

2 hand destructions followed by card destruction – Obviously bad for card advantage, but u will most likely have drawn into CoSR and some revival by then – but your opponent will pick the 2 most dead cards in his/her hand when u use hand destruction so In theory, after both of them they should have a pretty good hand only for you to follow with card destruction for some damage – VERY effective against DAD as their grave will most probably have a lot more than three and quite good against GB as you can get rid of test tigers/ bestiari’s so they can only be brought back with prem/reborn (hopefully you discarded that aswell.)

Also card trooper into Mezuki is an obvious one, snipe hunter discard mezuki is a 1 for advantage, same with morphing jar.

The only card I can recommend to the deck myself is DD crow but I cant fit it in…

I have spoken enough… Please rate AND fix and give reasons for changes :-)

Answer 1

its ok

Answer 2

I think you should git rid of 1 Card of Safe Return and a Lightning Vortex and maybe a Solemn Judgement. I think this because you need to put in more traps such as Dark Bribe, Sakeretsu Armor, or Dimensional Prison, anything to stop your opponent from destroying  your cards.

Answer 3

- 1 card of safe return

- 1 lightning vortex

+ 2 raigeki break



raigeki break into mezuki

raigeki break into Despair From the dark

both of those are plus 1 plays. if not plus 2

although i would really try to add in a il blud. i know you said on a budget, but

- 1 ryu kokki

+ 1 il blud

it will make a huge difference

with mezuki, il blud can be played in 2's since its easy to send it to the grave then revive it.