Zombie deck help?

Question

Monsters 18

3 Ryu Kokki

1 Goblin Zombie

3 Pyramid Turtle

1 Sangan

2 Giant Rat

1 Spirit Reaper

3 Zombie Master

2 cyber dragon

1 Morphing jar

1 Snipe hunter

Spells 15

3 Book of Life

3 Card of Safe Return

2 Creature Swap

1 Darkworld dealings/ card destruction

1 Heavy Storm

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Monster Reborn

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain control

Traps 7

2 Raigeki break

2 Dust tornado

2 Threatning roar

1 Torrential Tribute

I changed it back. Plz dont recommend the cards i mentioned before, if you dont know them, go to my question before this.

plz rate out of ten and tell me improvemnts. Oh and zombies are doing well in Nashville right now, lol.

Answer 1

i still say 2 koki's lol 3 is to much anyways add a tornado and get rid of koki and use destruction over dwd i rate 8/10

Answer 2

use card destruction over darkworld dealings also check out my arcana force deck its competed and i have all the cards except 2 worlds

now for your deck

+1 marshmallon

or                                           your choice

+1 arcana force-0 the fool

+ 1 giant trunade

+ 2 ll bud you can get them easy now take a look at the link below

and it's a 10/10

http://shriektcg.twoday.net/20080510/