..do you like this poem?

Question

what do you think? any suggestions? thanks..oh&&btw im 11.

Be happy.

Be grateful.

Take in the moment.

Remember the details.

At all those awkward moments.

Angry times.

And when you think the last thing you will be doing is smiling.

Smile.

Laugh.

Be careless.

Just remember tomorrow will be a better day.

Things could be worse.

There aren’t many of these moments.

You can’t relive it once it’s over.

But you can make more.

Enjoy life…

Make friends.

Fall in love.

Life isn’t short.

It’s just beginning.

:].

Answer 1

I do like it !

Especially the "you can make more" part

Answer 2

I think its really good. especially since your 11.

Answer 3

I do like it. Your only 11? That's really good.

Answer 4

that was great!!!!!! hey...ppl,

tell me what you think of  my poems!!!!!

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Answer 5

They sound like greetings cards, things I have heard many times before. Yet you are only 11 so you have time to grow

Answer 6

It's good.... I am 13. Lol

Thanks for commenting on mine btw... :D

Your poem is true....you can't relive good things when they are over...Relish all the times you have with your friends and family...it might be over in the blink of an eye.

Thanks for sharing.

Answer 7

Catie,

I hope you always feel this way!  You are an amazing 11 year old poet.  Keep writing.  By the way, great last stanza!

Answer 8

Yeah Iike it im 11 too here are my poems

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