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**poem** is this good enough for the governors school of the arts??????

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Journey through 57th Street

The vast grey sheet seems

to call to her--- they are coming.

A few droplets break free and then

Liberation!

She is mesmerized by their power

as the dreams on the souls

of her feet guide her,

through the dark, alluring alley

They sting now as they hit her flesh;

envious that she has changed their

known destiny. The bitter, foolish,

droplets latch onto her skin as they sink in,

sending their chilling revenge to her very core;

they think they can stop her.

Yet her feet, small as they are, continue to stride

to the upbeat hopes ticking away in her heart

as the drumming of the rain harmoneously ties,

& tries to weigh her down.

Her indifferent saviors know not of the icy kiss

nor fear holding her captive. They trudge along

bound in their fresh leather innocence trying to

squander the enemy. Splish splosh splash.

Keep your head up high, darling.

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  1. Love it - what a beautiful journey of walking in the rain.  I have never quite imaged it as this before. Well done. Suggestion: L6 - is the word "souls" meant to be "soles" - or are you adding additional personification to the feet? ♥


  2. OH...YEA, THAT WAS FANTASTIC. YOU REALLY HAVE AWAY WITH WORDS. GOOD LUCK YOU HAVE AN EXCELLENT FUTURE

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