"Babel" A Trigee try, what o you think?

Question

George O'...................he was an author

who wrote...................then of now

a book of................... vision, poignant

fiction.........................his truth foreseen?

take a look.................compare the pen

to now, to see.............stranger then fiction

his reality....................or a madman's dream

without mention............of a Bible Book

savior..........................some call a madman too.

Answer 1

Interesting.  The last line did not flow as well for me.  'Stranger than fiction' cliched, maybe just twist to 'fiction, so strange.'  This is not bad, especially since it has nine lines, making it harder to keep continuity between all three.

Answer 2

You and I are experiencing the same problem with Poem #2. The Trigee is the most difficult form I have ever encountered. Keep trying; it will happen eventually.