"Baby girl"...what do you think of the song(it's rap)?

Question

(Verse 1)

They tried to throw the book at my Daddy when I was little,

But nope only got 9 years,

And the trick was never there,

Daddy never care,

Too busy dealing methamphetamine and weed,

Not caring bout his baby girl to feed,

And he wasn’t there so didn’t know,

Didn’t know a lot of things,

Like men who made baby girl bleed,

Or junk momma did high of that coke and weed,

Seem like no one give a d**n bout baby girl,

To hyped on the own problems and greed,

Just mistreat,

Misread,

Cause to bled,

So young and can’t be freed.

(Verse 2)

It’s under estimated,

The pain in baby girl’s eyes,

The struggle to sort the lies,

Sort lies from right,

Not to give up the fight,

Even though aint no one hearin’ the cries,

Baby girl gotta do it own self if want life,

Everyday try to strive,

Everyday a new fight

But light hidden by darkness,

So it always looks like night,

And tomorrow never come today,

All this heat,

And the rain never come to ease the pain,

They it’ll come tomorrow,

But I’m impatient and won’t wait.

Answer 1

Even rap has more rhythm, try it again.

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Answer 2

i dont like it sorry