"Being Buoyant," isn't that what we're all after?

Question

I am a castaway on an island

You dropped me off once upon a time

been two months, here I stand.

Every passing day made it clearer

To experience romance, gives life

and purpose derives from it.

But when it slips through

into the cracks of the earth

all the once perfect scenes of us, vitiates.

I had the picture of you,

crystal in my mind.

Circumstances became boulders

and this borrowed boat of ours

became shambles.

I came ashore,

telling myself you drowned loving me.

Words of empty comfort is what it is.

But my mind need not tell my heart.

I don't wish for you to save me again,

I only dream of the feelings

that kept me afloat.

Buoyancy is what I'm searching for.

Answer 1

Wow! I had an idea in my head through the poem, and i was thinking to myself what this poem meant until i read the last line. i thought it was very good, i really like the last line. Gave strong images, good metaphors, this poem was within my tastes so i say it was good. Hope to see you post more of these pieces.