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"Hey can you look at this" ?

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Can you take a look at this I really need your opinion?

Tell me what you think about this song I wrote....be honestly.

This song is called:"It's Just a Play on Words"

I've got it,I've got it

I've got it and you don't

I've got it,I've got it

I heard nothing but good things about you

trying your hardest at something I could so easily do

Take out your sketchbook,you drew your pictures

of your fantasy's which is reality for me

So has she told you ,I know shes told you

the things that we would do, it was something like p**n

Yeah and I know she liked it, h**l no she loved it

but she'll never admit it

She's in love and he's in love too

Don't be jealous when I tell you, I got far

and that's more then what I can say for you

She's in love and he's in love too

But don't be jealous when I tell you I need loved her

That makes me better then you

I heard somethings but they were only whispers

you're such a sucker, you haven't ever kissed her

How do you feel when she talks about me

I just know that you cant take it

but have would you take it

Telling her that you don't mind

but it really makes you want to vomit

Yeah so next time when you think your a winner

just remember you're still only second best

You're still only second best

She's in love and he's in love too

Just don't be jealous when I tell you, I got far

and that's more then what I can say for you

She's in love and he's in love too

But don't be jealous when I tell you I need loved her

That makes me better

That makes me better then you

I've got it,I've got it

I've got it,I've got it

I only gave her what she really wanted

yeah and I know she wanted it

That's more then what I can say for you

I just gave her what she really wanted

yeah and I know she wanted it

I make it out like a winner

so what does that make you

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  1. Your not a loser

    spencer.t


  2. you almost had it

  3. YOU SHOULD NEVER PUT YOUR LYRICS OUT FOR THE PUBLIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what r u thinking?????????

  4. Very cool.

    Star for you.

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