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"Poem" Would you add a verse of your own?

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Could you add on and shape what

is to come for the person in this

poem?=)

Once in to the eyes of fate I did see,

in those murky depths it was made clear to me,

the day soon would be at hand

when I would take

my first and final brave stand.

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  1. I walked many miles,

    Now I approach the end,

    I want to thank you,

    For being my best friend.


  2. Once in to the eyes of fate I did see,

    in those murky depths it was made clear to me,

    the day soon would be at hand

    when I would take

    my first and final brave stand

    As the sun rises from far east

    A young warrior awakens to his reality

    Fear would be his only enemy

    One battle does not a war make

    no longer a boy forever a man

  3. I stood upon this Highlanders hill

    Sighting Culloden's green land

    Imagining the screems and shrills

    Of those brave men

    And their fighting clans

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