"hoping to find love" please comment =)

Question

I see couples everywhere

looking at each other with that stare

the one that says I love you with all my heart

I'm so jealous of them I don't know where to start

I just wish I had someone like they do

someone I could love and open my heart to

why is it so hard to find someone that loves you

and that will stay during hard times too?

I just have so much to offer and to give

but there's no one that will take it

and if there is, she's so hard to find

I wish I had a clue of some kind

all I know is that when I find that perfect girl

I'll love her like no one has ever before

there will be hugs and kisses every day

I will give her every reason to stay

I know she is out there in some place

if only there was a trace

every night as I stare at the moon

I just hope I can find her soon

Answer 1

Ah ha -- you just need the key.  Wonderful poem -- well done, and goes along with my philosophy in many ways.

I hope you find her soon, and it is good to know that you will treasure her.

My husband and I found the keys, but that doesn't always lead to success.  You should have much better because you are not a loner and willing to open yourself up.

And -- you can write well too.

T.

Answer 2

well i can tell you you are basically writing for many guys and i think that you have a real winner i was so into it when i say the title and i do hope you find that one girl soon

best of luck

*cierra*

Answer 3

wow that is so sweet (and a really good poem)

everyone has the perfect match some find him/her faster than others but remember she is searching for you just as much as you are searching for her

Answer 4

It's wonderful I liked it very much.