"i hate it all, i hated you."?

Question

I told myself I wouldn’t cry

I never needed you by my side

And even though you were never there

Somehow I still wished that you would care

And that I was enough for you to try

Life’s not so bad if you just believe

But you chose the bottle over me

There was no way I could make you see

I hated you for so long

You took away so much from me

My childhood and every dream

The memories of you still stream

Through my mind when I try to sleep

Do even have the slightest clue?

The scars you made and put me through

I hate it all, I hated you

You have no idea the things you do

Answer 1

Not bad, not bad at all. But it does kind of sound like a pop song, probably because of the rhymes. But I found it interesting.

Answer 2

I really like it. It has the rhythm of a song almost. It's sad and sort of insightful. It sounds personal and a bit held back. The overall feeling is a little depressing, but i think it's best that way

Answer 3

What's the question?

Answer 4

It's more a song i think!