-remade- rate my YuGiOh Burn deck?

Question

this is the upgraded version--

Monsters ( 20 )

3x des koala

3x solar flare dragon

3x apprentice magician

2x old vindictive magician

2x stealth bird

1x penguin soldier

1x marshmallon

1x neo-spacian grand mole

1x sangan

1x cloudian sheep cloud

1x mask of darkness

1x blowback dragon

traps ( 12 )

3x just desserts

2x secret barrel

1x ordeal of a traveler

1x ojama trio

1x magic cylinder

1x bottomless trap hole

1x gravity bind

1x ceasefire

1x dark bribe

magic ( 11 )

2x wave-motion cannon

2x nightmare's steelcage

1x lighning vortex

1x swords of revealing light

1x scapegoat

1x heavy storm

1x monster reborn

1x mystical space typhoon

1x level limit area B

well, thats the deck atm, its 43 cards any rates or fixes..

must be tournament legal, and i am trying to get hold of more dark bribes, not an easy card to get.

thanks, rob

Answer 1

ok, i like the layout of the deck, but i question a few things

why do you have a playset of apprentice magicians?

whats the point of monster reborn?

you have quite a few offensive cards and i dont see the point!

a good burn deck can win 3-5 turn without any offense at all!

also, great card is Soul of Fire. (Opponent draws a card. Remove pyro monster from your deck from play. deal damage equal to half its attack! cant attack this turn.)

other great combo is lava golem, misfortune, and spiritual flame art-kurenai. I just thought of it, too! special summon lava golem on opponents field. then, next turn, he loses 1000 points, activate misfortune, he loses 1500, then activate brain control and offer it with spiritual flame art to deal 3000! definitely add that combo to your deck!

Answer 2

To upgrade you burn deck get a few lava golems(Tribute 2 of your opponent's monsters to summon this card on their field, each of their stand by phases they take 1000lp damage), back fires, curse of darkness(inflict 1000lp damage for each spell card active the controller of that card takes the damage), ultimate baseball kid(+ 1000atk for each fire monster on your side of the field), buttomless trap hole, robbin zombie(when your opponent takes damage by you discard one card from the top of your opponent's deck) or robbin goblin(when your opponent takes damage by you discard one card from your opponent's hand) as a few ideas and if you want inferono (requires 1 fire monster remove from play to special summon it to the field + when this card destroys a monster result of battle inflict 1500lp damage) But thats just a thought:D Good luck to you:D

Answer 3

i own a burn deck myself. heres some help.

-3 solar flare dragon

-1 penguin soldier

-2 old vind magician

+1 ojama trio

-1 blowback dragon

+1 jinzo

+1 stealth bird

+2 mask of darknesse

+3 nightmare penguins

Answer 4

since its a burn you dont need clearers like old vind magician or stalls like peguin soldier.

you may want solemn judgment instead of dark bribe.