<span title="Awakening.............................?">Awakening...................</span>

Question

Do you remember the time

when you were mad at me

in your hot-headed way

and i reacted in my hot-headed way?

Then i realised i was wrong

and apologized profusely.

I had never done that before

and in that moment

i realised

it was

because

i love you.

Answer 1

Thats alright! Just too short and i am not sure about that word, hot-headed.  

Answer 2

It doesn&#039;t matter if he remembers it,

what obviously matters is that YOU do!

Keep remembering!

We all should have such awakenings......

ma

Answer 3

I know when that day happened for me I was, at long last, starting to be an adult.  Keep writing.  On the technical side, my teacher says a poem becomes stronger when you can eliminate the unneeded words, such as,

&quot;the , but, a &quot; or any word that does not make your poem stronger by its addition. I really enjoyed your thoughtful poem.