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Question

ohhhkay i know a ton of people ask if you like their poetry and everything but o well, im asking anyway. do you like my poem!?

through tinted windows we see the world

through broken glass we are mistaken

trapped inside

we try to remember what its like

the colors run down the walls

a dirty puddle on the ground

in our corners huddled

to scared to leave the room

our feelings stuck inside us

through tinted windows the sky seeps in

to bright to open our eyes

frightened we turn the other way

bare walls our only comfort

tinted windows our only friends

we refuse all reality

the world through tinted windows

Answer 1

Wow. That&#039;s deep. Yes. I like it.

Answer 2

Despite a few mechanical errors (spelling mistakes and the lack of a few commas) I thought that that was beautifully written. I loved the transitions and cannot wait for future work!

Answer 3

I thought I was a poet

but I didn&#039;t know it

but my feet show it

cause their....Longfellows!!

Answer 4

i liked it!!! i love the repitition (i forget how to spell the word) you used!!! Great job!