♥ Out of my short poems......??? ♥?

Question

Which of my short poems is your favourite and why?

http://l3luel3ubbles.piczo.com/mypoems?preview=y&sl=0&st=0&cr=2

Answer 1

tears from within and centre of emotion.

they are really good...id love to read more...u have talent...keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

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Answer 2

Listen I really enjoyed tears from within, the one about the wrong guy and the poem about your granpa passing away. You certainly have the talent but don't become complacent yet your only 14 you've got a whole lot of trials in life you will go through and plenty more to write about just yet, Have you ever thought about playing an instrument also that could help better your poems with some music to it. Don't be afraid remember Madonna started when she was only 16 so your on the right track I think. Anyway would love to hear more so I'm making you a contact OK bye.

Answer 3

I really loved "Life Long" because as you read it its anything you want it to be, it has any meaning which reflects events in yuor life. It doesn't have a specific meaning like the one about the father who was chasing them, it just sums up the definition of emotion in life I guess. It could mean anything to you...death,love,jelousy young memories or anything! I found it to be a very versatile poem which could be meaningfull to a wide variety of audiences.